Rewriting part one

I’m working on rewriting my first tale and honestly, it’s pretty bad XD. It will improve significantly though. I’ve already shuffled the character positions around within the narrative and set the scene in a real town I’ve visited, so there are plenty of adjustments left to make.. not forgetting that my writing wasn’t great back then XD. There were countless typos and grammatical errors; you’d think I had just picked up English. Anyway, I’m 70% through with the rewrite and wanted to give a quick update:) I’ve finished it now:gag:

I’ll upload the story here once it’s ready. Now that I’m done XD:gag::gag::gag: